:22:02
However, by then...
:22:05
I'd started concocting
a little plot of my own.
:22:09
Well?
:22:12
This is fascinating.
:22:14
Of course it is.
:22:17
Maybe it's a little long and maybe
there's some repetitions...
:22:20
but you're
not a professional writer.
:22:23
I wrote that with my heart.
:22:25
Sure you did.
:22:28
That's what makes it great.
:22:32
What it needs is maybe
a little more dialogue.
:22:36
What for? I can say
anything I want with my eyes.
:22:39
Well, it certainly could use
a pair of shears and a blue pencil.
:22:41
I will not have it butchered.
:22:44
Of course not,
but it ought to be organized.
:22:47
Just an editing job.
You can find somebody.
:22:50
Who? I'd have to have
somebody I could trust.
:22:54
When were you born?
I mean what sign of the zodiac?
:22:57
- I don't know.
- What month?
:23:00
December 2 1.
:23:02
Sagittarius. I like Sagittarians.
You can trust them.
:23:07
- Thank you.
- I want you to do this work.
:23:10
Me?
:23:12
I'm busy. I just finished a script,
and I'm doing another assignment.
:23:16
I don't care.
:23:19
You know, I'm pretty expensive.
I get 500 a week.
:23:23
I wouldn't worry about money.
I'll make it worth your while.
:23:28
Maybe I'd better take the rest
of the script home and read it.
:23:30
I couldn't let it out of my house.
You'll have to finish it here.
:23:34
Well, it's getting kind of late.
:23:37
- Are you married, Mr.--
- Name is Gillis. Single.
:23:41
Where do you live?
:23:42
Hollywood.
Alto Nido Apartments.
:23:44
There's something wrong
with your car, you said.
:23:46
There sure is.
:23:48
- Why shouldn't you stay here?
- I'll come back early tomorrow.
:23:52
Nonsense.
There's a room over the garage.
:23:56
Max will take you there.
:23:58
Max!