Nelly & Monsieur Arnaud
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Good. I'll see you tomorrow.
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He seems like a fine boy.
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Thank you.
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Have you known him long?
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Is he a friend?
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Close?
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Pretty close.
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That's all she'll say!
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What can I...
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You can talk about yourself.
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But I do.
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That's true.
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They're hardly
extravagant confessions.

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Did you read it?
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What do you think?
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It's lively, isn't it?
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Yes what?
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I find it a little repetitive.
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No, it's very different.
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We knowthe courtroom atmosphere.
I'd cut it.

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Cut what?
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All of this.
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It would be more concise.
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It sure would.
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I find it rather savory.
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I spent hours on that paragraph.
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You don't find it funny?
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Does the content or the style
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bother you?
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Both.
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At least you're honest.
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But how does it strike you?
Is it smug? Dated? Both again.

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And your description
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of the natives is...
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Colonialist? Say it.
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Yes, maybe.
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''Their innocence and craftiness...''
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They're silly clich's.
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Sometimes you get trapped.
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Won't it be too dry now?
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Okay. Cut it.
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But pick it up here.
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Excuse me. I'd forgotten.

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