:47:03
So Orlean "digresses in long
passages." Blah, blah, blah.
:47:08
"No narrative unites these passages."
New York Times Book Review.
:47:10
I can't structure this. It's that
sprawling New Yorker shit.
:47:14
Man, I'd fuck her up the ass.
:47:18
- Sorry.
- The book has no story. There's no story.
:47:21
All right. Make one up.
:47:23
I mean, nobody in this town
can make up a crazy story like you.
:47:27
- You're the king of that.
- No, I didn't want to do that this time.
:47:31
It's someone else's material.
I have a responsibility to Susan...
:47:36
Anyway, I wanted to grow as a writer.
I wanted to do something simple.
:47:40
Show people how amazing
flowers are.
:47:44
Are they amazing?
:47:47
I don't know. I think they are.
:47:54
- I need you to get me out of this.
- All right.
:47:58
Charlie, you've been stringing
them along for months now.
:48:01
Not to give them anything at this
point would be a terrible career move.
:48:14
Hey, my script's going amazing.
:48:16
Right now, I'm working out
an image system.
:48:18
Because of my multiple personality
theme, I've chosen a motif...
:48:21
...of broken mirrors to show my
protagonist's fragmented self.
:48:25
Bob says an image system increases
the complexity of an aesthetic emotion.
:48:30
- Bob says...
- You sound like you're in a cult.
:48:32
No, it's just good writing technique.
:48:35
I made you a copy
of McKee's 10 Commandments.
:48:38
I posted one over
both our work areas.
:48:50
You shouldn't have done that.
:48:54
Because it's extremely helpful.
Hey, Charles, I'm putting a song on.
:48:58
"Happy Together."