:07:03
well... it's a little
embarrassing.
:07:07
Those adjectives
are flatfooted and redundant.
:07:11
I'm sorry,
I mean...
:07:14
anyway, don't--
what do I know?
:07:16
Don't even listen
to what I say.
:07:18
I mean...
:07:23
Anyone else?
:07:30
Catherine is right.
:07:33
Your story
is a piece of shit.
:07:36
You express nothing
but banalities,
:07:39
and, formally speaking,
are unable to construct
:07:42
a single
compelling sentence.
:07:44
You ride on a wave
of cliches so worn, in fact,
:07:47
it actually approaches
a level of grotesquerie.
:07:50
And your subtitle--
"The Rawness of Truth"--
:07:57
is that supposed to be
a joke of some sort?
:08:00
Or are you just
being pretentious?
:08:13
Okay.
:08:19
Who's next?
:08:30
Vi:
Marcus, wait up!
:08:32
What do you want?
:08:34
Don't be so upset,
it's okay.
:08:36
What the fuck are you talking
about?! What's okay?
:08:38
- He hated my story also.
- You story was terrible.
:08:42
Marcus, you'll write
something better next time.
:08:45
Patronizing fuck! If you had been
honest with me in the first place,
:08:48
I wouldn't have read it.
I knew it was shit,
:08:51
but like an idiot,
I believed you.
:08:53
That's not fair,
I was honest.
:08:55
Just because I wasn't sucking up
like that bitch, Catherine--
:08:57
I sure didn't hear you voice
your opinion when it mattered.