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:21:01
How about the commas and dates?
Are we supposed to circle those too?

:21:04
Let's just get this done, okay?
:21:10
What the hell is this?
:21:14
Marty told us to circle
all the commas in the last issue,

:21:16
so he could show us
how we used them improperly.

:21:19
What?
:21:21
He said, ''Commas
should always appear in pairs.''

:21:23
Apparently the issue was rife
with comma errors.

:21:25
- ''Rife''?
- That's what he said.

:21:27
l see.
:21:31
No, l'm not angry, Marty.
l'm embarrassed for you.

:21:33
These people work
grueling hours for meager pay.

:21:35
They deserve a thank you,
:21:37
not another one
of your world-famous tantrums.

:21:40
Yeah, okay. l'd resign before
l'd let you bully them like that again.

:21:44
And l will.
Do you understand that?

:21:48
Okay. Thank you.
( handset slams )

:21:57
''The Great Comma Debate''
is history,

:22:00
so we can all
go back to work.

:22:07
There are good editors,
there are bad editors.

:22:10
You'll have both.
:22:12
My hope for you though
is that once,

:22:15
at least once
you get a truly great one.

:22:21
A great editor
defends his writers--

:22:23
against anyone.
He stands up, and fights for you.

:22:26
Michael Kelly
was that kind of editor.

:22:29
He had that kind of courage.
:22:34
And that's what hung him.
:22:37

:22:47
Hello.
:22:48
Hey, Chuck, it's Marty Peretz.
You got a minute?

:22:50
Of course,
how are you, Marty?

:22:53
l'm in a bit
of an uncomfortable situation.

:22:55
l thought you might
be able to help me out.

:22:57
- Sure.
- lt's about Mike.

:22:59
- Oh.
- He and l--


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